My thesis...It's the same thing a submitted last time...sorry I was a bit confused before :)

         The topic that I’ve chosen to write my essay on would not only change individuals, but most certainly change the world. I disagree with advertising by using women’s bodies to make a sell. It’s one thing when you’re doing a commercial clothed; but something socially, and morally wrong when you see more skin and less clothes. I’ve chosen this topic for a number of reasons, a few of which I’ll be privileged to touch on in the upcoming essay. For one, women lose self-confidence and self-esteem when they see pictures of half-naked women. They deserve to feel confident with themselves. The fact that they go to the store and can’t do anything about seeing fake undressed women because they’re literally decorating the walls of every clothing store out there is dead wrong. Not only does it affect the women but it affects the men. It ruins relationships. Men lose sight on what’s important and it tears apart marriages. It’s not fair to anyone. Not to mention all the other people who are victims to this tragedy such as children. What are we trying to say to our children?! That it’s ok to show off your body? Children are pure and innocent until we corrupt them. They see garbage at a young age and it will mold their minds into something terrifying creating monsters for the future. We say we want to make our world a better place…but do we really mean it? Are we making an effort to teach the future generations’ positive values and etiquette to save the world from so much pain and grief? We say we want to give our children the great future that we never had, but are we willing to look in the right places for the right answers? As we eliminate naked advertising our children will be better prepared to create the world we wish we could live in, relationships will thrive, and women will be able to have the confidence that they don’t have to be something that they’re not. Individuals will be happier, but more importantly our families will be happier and united. Do you want to make a difference in this world? Let’s put an end to the things that cause so much agony, in so many people’s lives. No more nude advertising.